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LA-Uninvited Guests- 6

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The Brotherhood scent was growing increasingly stronger as they neared the heart of their territory. The small dog also seemed to be getting more nervous the closer they got. Not even once had she looked back at the siblings since they left the riverbank.

As soon as the dogs stepped out of the brush, into a clearing that seemed to serve as the packs headquarters, the siblings were immediately greeted by a dog that looked like themselves, but a little huskier.  He obviously wasn't too happy to see them, as he had his teeth bared and his hair on end.

Persephone quickly gave her brother a small nip, as he had instinctually bared his teeth at the threatening dog.

Quickly regaining his composure Hades stepped up, gently pushing Delta out of his way. The dog before him growled louder as Hades came closer.

"I am Hades." He said, his voice strong, but not threatening. "I take it you are the leader of this pack?" He continued, not giving the dog a chance to respond."One of your packmates requested us to find you."

Persephone stepped out from behind her brother. "We mean you no harm." She quickly added,"We bring news of your brother Echo."
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Okay, so this is the first RP I've ever been in and I've always been self-conscious of my writing skills so I was wondering if I've been doing alright? Or if anyone has any tips for me? I know some people don't like RPing with bad writers so I just wanted to make sure my writing isn't annoying :P
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Let's hope he doesn't shoot the messenger :'c